bookbunny9's reviews
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Hát, ez nem nekem való volt.

This book has a lot of potential that it ultimately falls short of. A few more solid passes of editing would have done wonders for pacing, character and relationship development, and catching pesky typos / tense or pronoun issues. As a positive, I loved that

Matthias (Mátyás?) is from Győr (which retained its accents) and that Budapest was "pronounced" correctly!

Voltak versek, amik egész egyszerűen nem koppantak, de volt közöttük olyan is ami kifejezetten elragadott.

Great characterization + fun with gender! Loved Lieutenant Easton and much of the cast.

Poor editing (e.g., all of the sentences are the same length, typos, egregious amount of comma splices) + poor characterization. Plot could have been interesting, but is neither well-written nor well-executed.

Historical inaccuracies, poor characterization, multiple poorly contrived plot points that broke even suspension of disbelief.