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587 reviews
- Plot- or character-driven? A mix
- Strong character development? Yes
- Loveable characters? Yes
- Diverse cast of characters? Yes
- Flaws of characters a main focus? No
4.0
Graphic: Cursing, Death, Sexual content, and Blood
- Plot- or character-driven? A mix
- Strong character development? Yes
- Loveable characters? Yes
- Diverse cast of characters? No
- Flaws of characters a main focus? Yes
4.0
Graphic: Sexual content
- Plot- or character-driven? Character
- Strong character development? Yes
- Loveable characters? Yes
- Diverse cast of characters? No
- Flaws of characters a main focus? Yes
5.0
Graphic: Cursing, Infidelity, Sexual content, and Grief
Moderate: Car accident, Abortion, and Pregnancy
- Plot- or character-driven? A mix
- Strong character development? Yes
- Loveable characters? Yes
- Diverse cast of characters? No
- Flaws of characters a main focus? No
4.0
Graphic: Cursing and Sexual content
Moderate: Car accident and Death of parent
4.0
2.0
Graphic: Confinement, Cursing, Death, Gun violence, Sexual content, Torture, Violence, Blood, Trafficking, Murder, and Injury/Injury detail
- Plot- or character-driven? A mix
- Strong character development? No
- Loveable characters? No
- Diverse cast of characters? No
- Flaws of characters a main focus? No
2.75
Graphic: Confinement, Cursing, Death, Gore, Gun violence, Rape, Sexual assault, Sexual violence, Slavery, Torture, Violence, Blood, Trafficking, Kidnapping, Stalking, Murder, and Injury/Injury detail
- Plot- or character-driven? A mix
- Strong character development? Yes
- Loveable characters? Yes
- Diverse cast of characters? Yes
- Flaws of characters a main focus? No
4.5
Graphic: Cursing, Sexual content, and Alcohol
Moderate: Miscarriage, Death of parent, and Pregnancy
Minor: Addiction
- Plot- or character-driven? Character
- Strong character development? No
- Loveable characters? No
- Diverse cast of characters? Yes
- Flaws of characters a main focus? No
2.5
I did not enjoy this book. I received it as an ARC, which is the only reason that I pushed through it. I almost DNF after only a third of the book. Besides the fact that it is riddled with typos, the author has very repetitive and odd word choice throughout (I actually wondered if it was badly translated to English from a different language.) The dialogue is cheesy, cringey, and unrealistic—no one would ever say these kinds of things in real life.
Overall, it is very character driven—and I don’t like any of the characters. It feels like the author doesn’t know what feelings she’s trying to set in any of the scenes. Nothing in the story feels developed throughout the book. She also makes glaringly obvious mistakes with her firearm references (for example, revolvers don’t have clips). And these are the stupidest and most inept mafia men in the world.
The writing is told from the perspective of Kiara and her inner monologue made me want to chuck my Kindle against the wall. She is ridiculously immature and melodramatic. And her thinking she’s smarter than everyone else was laughable.
There is zero buildup of romance between Milo and Kiara, other than a few comments that she finds him attractive. The smut isn’t good and I found it to be extremely cringey and rushed.
The plot twist is predictable because the author makes obvious references throughout the book towards it. It was overall a grind to get through and I do not recommend. There are much better dark and mafia romances out there.
Graphic: Confinement, Cursing, Death, Drug use, Gun violence, Sexual content, Sexual violence, Torture, Violence, Blood, Trafficking, Kidnapping, Grief, Murder, Alcohol, and Injury/Injury detail
Moderate: Car accident, Death of parent, and Pregnancy
- Plot- or character-driven? A mix
- Strong character development? Yes
- Loveable characters? It's complicated
- Diverse cast of characters? Yes
- Flaws of characters a main focus? No
4.25
Moderate: Alcoholism, Gun violence, Murder, Gaslighting, and Toxic friendship