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A review by stardustreader
Jazeera: Legend of the Fort Island by Yash Pawaskar
3.0
This is a short story about this island Jazeera.
people of this island is going through a tough situation where their childrens were disappearing and they link it this situation with black magic.
Junglees and Mahavanis residing on the outskirt of the island are plotting an attack on the fort as they are the real inhabitants of the island and it was snatched from them by treacherous activity.
This island has a past but they want to bring the change and make a safe future.
This story has a lot of potential but i can honestly say that there is lot of missing points .
Like there is no protagonist in the story ,every single character has their role equal to each other .
And if i talk about the rular of the fort then there must have been a reason why Zorawar was like that .
What about the serum he drank occasinally ,where did he get that ?
There has been a lot of undescribed events .
At one point it seems like Hamid could be hero , but if really want to go inside the palace by killing the guards he did not need the help of that woman.
so overall i can say that it could have been a good story if was a little bit slower.
Try it once ,easy to go through.
people of this island is going through a tough situation where their childrens were disappearing and they link it this situation with black magic.
Junglees and Mahavanis residing on the outskirt of the island are plotting an attack on the fort as they are the real inhabitants of the island and it was snatched from them by treacherous activity.
This island has a past but they want to bring the change and make a safe future.
This story has a lot of potential but i can honestly say that there is lot of missing points .
Like there is no protagonist in the story ,every single character has their role equal to each other .
And if i talk about the rular of the fort then there must have been a reason why Zorawar was like that .
What about the serum he drank occasinally ,where did he get that ?
There has been a lot of undescribed events .
At one point it seems like Hamid could be hero , but if really want to go inside the palace by killing the guards he did not need the help of that woman.
so overall i can say that it could have been a good story if was a little bit slower.
Try it once ,easy to go through.