A review by hillarycopsey
First Love, Second Draft by Becca Kinzer

2.0

This book was not for me. Too much exposition via dialogue. Too much telling instead of showing. Too much madcap nonsense — a fall into a bathtub, a woman scared by a mouse and jumping on someone’s back, Hello Kitty boxers. Main characters who have been together since high school and married and still don’t seem to know anything about each other. What?! 
There’s a good idea here, but the execution is just awful. 

Thanks to Netgalley for the advance copy.