This took a bit of time for me to get into, partially because the author chose to refer to characters with three different names in most cases (first, last, and a name during sub/Dom play.). It was a bit confusing to follow as the large cast was introduced. I found the website for the Dartmouth cobras exponentially helpful to keep track of the multiple players starring in the plot.

There are a few hops in the plot line too which left me wanting to hear more about what happened during the time between chapters that was left unwritten and it wrapped up VERY quickly.

Overall, the writing was a little lacking but I liked the story and just purchased book #2. I originally downloaded the sample of book 2 and chose to give up and start at book one because book two alluded too much of the previous book's back story to follow. Some series work when read out of order but this isn't one of them!