Well, it wasn’t the mpreg that didn’t work for me, it was the terrible writing. 

The editing in this was rough. Usually I can overlook these in self-pubs, but there were so many egregious spelling and grammatical errors that it took me out of the story each time they popped up.  

And for erotica - I gotta be honest, this  wasn’t very erotic. More so cringy than hot, making me worry for Emerson’s prolapsed (cuz that’s how it’s read!!) asshole every time it was brought up!