There is something to be said about the importance of representation in literature, surrounding topics of transgender identity and stigmatized mental health disorders — especially for youth. And I recognize the intent, along with her sincerity, of author Gephart in writing this book. That said, the story oft felt superficial, likely because there are too many subplots. As such genuine/authentic development of Lily’s struggles with acceptance for her gender identity + Dunkin’s struggles with bipolar disorder felt stilted. In addition, while their friendship is meant to be a central core of the novel, their budding relationship got pushed aside for these subplots. I also found many parts of the novel potentially triggering, and while I appreciate the mention of bullying + suicide, the very serious / emotional topics are presented more as afterthoughts than given the proper weight and development that they are afforded (plus perhaps a content warning would be helpful to not trigger readers who may have experienced these events). I understand the novel is meant to be for grade/middle-school aged youth but if you’re choosing to grapple with difficult topics, there needs to be some thoughtfulness + care placed into it, which I often felt this book lacked in trying to “simplify” things for the target audience.