she had always been beautiful to me, but even more so when she was covered with blood and panting because of the things i was doing to her.

i absolutely loved this (and i’m sooo in love with kohl). pretty sure i finished it within just a couple hours and i didn’t want it to end. i will say, there were a lot of spelling and grammar errors, which almost made me dnf, but i’m so glad i didn’t. there were also a few instances where the wrong pronouns were used for one of the main characters, which i’m assuming were not on purpose. a simple edit would go a long way with the spelling and grammar errors, but i loved it aside from those little things i noticed.