I actually really enjoyed this story. The story was great and kept me on the edge of my seat. Yes it was pretty dark, but hey... It's not my taste, but it kept the story interesting. I LOVED the twist and only half way saw it coming! Then the second twist, I didn't see coming. The omissions in the beginning really made the ending a surprise! All in all a nice read!

There were a few words that were misspelled or used in the wrong tense, but it didn't take away from the story. It was just noticeable so I figured I'd throw that out there.