I genuinely don't feel like I have any criticisms when it comes to this book. There wasn't a whole lot of action but there was so much drama. And I loved how normal the book felt. Well, normal given the circumstances. Like these characters were real people to me. They all had flaws that I have seen from people within my own family. And it was nice to see Mary Jane come out of her shell and become, yes, more of a teenager, but become more of herself. I honestly adored this book, and genuinely could not put it down. Fantastic read!