I was a little confused for the first few chapters, because it seemed like it jumped around a lot. But the farther in I got, the better it was. I thought that the whole idea of this story was pretty neat, and I liked the "Alternate Universe" thing as well. And I also liked the way that Conn described Darcy's friends at one point. He said that they would do whatever they could to protect Darcy. Raphael would use his fists, Jims would use his words, and Lily was probably the most dangerous because whatever she said, the others would follow. I think that that description was completely accurate, and I liked how they all fit so well together.