A review by booksalacarte
Heat of the Everflame by Penn Cole

adventurous challenging dark emotional mysterious tense fast-paced
  • Plot- or character-driven? A mix
  • Strong character development? Yes
  • Loveable characters? Yes
  • Diverse cast of characters? It's complicated
  • Flaws of characters a main focus? Yes

4.75

4.75⭐️3🌶️

3rd book
Romantasy
20yo FMC
Demi-gods vs mortals
Kidnapping
War
Slow burn
Found family
Intrigue

This third book in the series was an enjoyable read, though it felt a bit long at times. Despite that, I breezed through it pretty quickly!

However, I’m starting to feel frustrated with the FMC (female main character). She consistently lacks maturity as a ruler, and her impulsive decisions often create problems for everyone around her. I found myself agreeing with the regent when he firmly rejected her attempts to take control of the kingdom. As a magical healer, I also wondered why she wasn’t using her powers until the very end of the book—it’s clear she has immense potential, and I was hoping to see her prove her worth through her actions. There’s a lot of telling about her compassion, but because she hasn’t had a chance to truly lead, it doesn’t feel as impactful.

As for the MMC (male main character), I’m disappointed by his role in this book. He’s become too passive, almost like a doormat for the FMC. I want to see him develop his own purpose and identity, rather than just idolizing her. A stronger character on his part would make the FMC’s journey feel even more significant, but right now, their dynamic makes her seem weaker and more petulant.

The slow-burn romance that worked so well in earlier books seemed to lose its spark here. The tension mostly evaporated, and when the inevitable romance moments finally arrived, they felt out of place and disconnected from the plot. It almost seemed like the tension was being artificially dragged out, only to fizzle in a lackluster way.

On the positive side, we’re beginning to delve deeper into the magic system and world-building, which is exciting. While I wish more details were provided, I’m eager to learn more about the “Everflame” that gives the series its name.

While the book could’ve been trimmed down to be a bit tighter, that cliffhanger at the end definitely leaves me eager for the next book.



Spark of the Everflame- 5⭐️3🌶️
Glow of the Everflame- 5⭐️2.5🌶️