I like retellings of fairy tales. This one is decently written. This story is a letter from the Queen of Sorrow (otherwise known as the Evil Queen or Snow White Queen) to Wilhelm Carl Grimm, telling him about how she is wrongfully depicted as an evil queen and that Snow White is a vampire.

The letter is actually half-letter, half-narration. The format seemed jarring to me. You don't write a letter to someone that goes: "I pursed my heart-shaped lips..."

Otherwise, I am still interested in reading the rest of this tale.