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A review by femmefatale808
Game Misconduct by Bianca Sommerland
1.0
What I read from the summary, I expected to have gotten more than I did. I just wasn't feeling it, for some reason. I will give her a star for effort and the second star is simply because I felt bad about rating it one star.
Oriana seems to be like one of those little girls playing dress-up in mommy's clothes. You know the one playing in mommy's make-up while she's out. Yeah, I felt like she wasn't mature enough to take on the type of relationship she was seeking out. Even after her dad continuously rejected her, she kept coming back like a kicked puppy. I liked Silver, but we didn't get nearly enough of her as I would have liked. Silver just seems more like me. The fact Oriana had to look to her sister for guidance baffled me a little bit, even disturbed me at times. You would think the older sibling would have their shit together so they can give advice to the younger sibling and not the other way around.
I found Oriana to be weak, to be honest. She pretty much lived her life the way her father and Paul wanted her to live it. How long had she done this until she decided she wasn't happy with the way things were going? What didn't sit right with me was the way she treated Tyler. She knew she wasn't interested in him, but she constantly toyed with him like it was going out of style.
Another thing that ticked me off was the fact that she would refer to some of the characters by last name. There was a section towards the end of the story where Tim and Dean Richter were both in the same scene and she only referenced their last name. I had to go back to see which one was ushering them to his office. I never figured it out until she stated his first name towards the end of said scene.
I felt the development of her and Max's relationship was lacking. I was under the impression that her and his relationship was at the top of this hierarchy, then she would have little trysts with the others when the mood struck. I didn't even expect that initially, to be blunt. I assumed the story would have been centered around her and Max more than it was. Honestly, Max's desires weren't nearly as sick as one would be led to believe from reading the summary. His desires were a little bland and lackluster. Sloan was the only one at the opposite end of the kinky freak spectrum from everyone else.
Oriana seems to be like one of those little girls playing dress-up in mommy's clothes. You know the one playing in mommy's make-up while she's out. Yeah, I felt like she wasn't mature enough to take on the type of relationship she was seeking out. Even after her dad continuously rejected her, she kept coming back like a kicked puppy. I liked Silver, but we didn't get nearly enough of her as I would have liked. Silver just seems more like me. The fact Oriana had to look to her sister for guidance baffled me a little bit, even disturbed me at times. You would think the older sibling would have their shit together so they can give advice to the younger sibling and not the other way around.
I found Oriana to be weak, to be honest. She pretty much lived her life the way her father and Paul wanted her to live it. How long had she done this until she decided she wasn't happy with the way things were going? What didn't sit right with me was the way she treated Tyler. She knew she wasn't interested in him, but she constantly toyed with him like it was going out of style.
Another thing that ticked me off was the fact that she would refer to some of the characters by last name. There was a section towards the end of the story where Tim and Dean Richter were both in the same scene and she only referenced their last name. I had to go back to see which one was ushering them to his office. I never figured it out until she stated his first name towards the end of said scene.
I felt the development of her and Max's relationship was lacking. I was under the impression that her and his relationship was at the top of this hierarchy, then she would have little trysts with the others when the mood struck. I didn't even expect that initially, to be blunt. I assumed the story would have been centered around her and Max more than it was. Honestly, Max's desires weren't nearly as sick as one would be led to believe from reading the summary. His desires were a little bland and lackluster. Sloan was the only one at the opposite end of the kinky freak spectrum from everyone else.