The story potential and the characters really carry this series for me. The writing is lacking, but I like to hold out that the author is still finding their voice and quality will improve over time. I've done this before with other series and it's paid out for me. 

The books need another set of eyes and an editor. It's just small things, but there's enough of them. The writing just isn't polished. The main character has a "derringer" pistol, but the term makes no sense since this world is not our own. I really don't need to read the words "shampoo and conditioner" ever again.

But I like the set up of the story. I love the two kingdoms and how vastly different they are. I love the characters, and their growth as the book goes on. The discussion on mental health is very welcomed. Also, the two love interests actually talk, which is so refreshing. And that cliff hanger? I immediately need the next book. The author definitely found their strength in the last quarter of the book.

If you can be patient while the author hopefully strengthens her writing voice, I do recommend picking this series up.