A review by orionmerlin
Equal Rites by Terry Pratchett

adventurous funny lighthearted medium-paced
  • Plot- or character-driven? A mix
  • Strong character development? Yes
  • Loveable characters? Yes
  • Diverse cast of characters? No
  • Flaws of characters a main focus? Yes

4.5

Characters - 9/10
Terry Pratchett excels at creating memorable characters, and Equal Rites is no exception. Granny Weatherwax, the quintessential witch with a sharp tongue and sharp mind, is unforgettable and anchors the narrative beautifully. Eskarina, as the protagonist, is compelling as a young girl navigating her unique position as a female wizard in Discworld. Secondary characters, while slightly less developed, serve their roles well and add flavor to the story. Each character is distinct and easy to describe to others, and I felt they were richly crafted and enjoyable to follow.
Atmosphere/Setting - 8.5/10
The setting of Discworld is quirky, fantastical, and richly imaginative. As an earlier work in the series, it doesn’t feel as fleshed out as later entries, but it is still highly engaging. Pratchett's descriptions rely on humor and wit, which I found balanced the tone and added to the charm of the setting. The environments (the magical Discworld, Unseen University, and small villages) are easy to picture and work well with the whimsical energy of the story. The world felt alive and vibrant, supporting the narrative effectively.
Writing Style - 9.5/10
Pratchett's writing is effortlessly charming, full of clever wordplay, sharp humor, and philosophical undertones. His prose flows beautifully and balances narration with dialogue masterfully. I found the humor and wit distinct and endlessly enjoyable. While the writing can be a bit dense for newcomers, I thought it rewarded attention and engagement. His dialogue, especially Granny Weatherwax's, was filled with wisdom and sass, making me eager to pick up more of his books.
Plot - 9/10
The plot is engaging and offers a delightful exploration of gender roles and societal norms through the lens of fantasy. The pacing was mostly strong, with only a few sections feeling slower than necessary. The premise of a girl challenging the traditionally male role of wizard is compelling and thought-provoking. While the story doesn’t have the intricate twists of Pratchett’s later works, I found it satisfying and unique in its approach. The climax is enjoyable, and the resolution ties the themes together beautifully.
Intrigue - 9/10
The story held my attention well, thanks to its humor, unique perspective, and endearing characters. I was consistently intrigued to see how Eskarina’s journey unfolded and whether she succeeded in breaking societal expectations. While it wasn’t a traditional page-turner, its charm and wit made it irresistible. I found myself eager to return to the book and curious to see where the story would go next.
Logic/Relationships - 9/10
Pratchett’s world-building is whimsical yet consistent within its own rules. The magic system and social dynamics felt clear and logical, fitting seamlessly into Discworld’s satirical nature. The relationships, particularly between Granny Weatherwax and Eskarina, were heartfelt and believable, showing meaningful growth on both sides. I didn’t notice any plot holes, and the world-building struck a great balance between detail and accessibility. Everything in the story fit together cohesively, enhancing its overall impact.
Enjoyment - 9.5/10
I absolutely loved Equal Rites. Its humor, clever observations, and endearing characters made it a joy to read. While I recognize it’s not as polished as some of Pratchett’s later works, the charm and thoughtful themes more than made up for it. As a fan of whimsical fantasy, I found it an absolute delight from start to finish.