I'm sorry but Oli is the most annoying character ever written. The whole "i'm so bratty" thing is incredibly annoying. Also yes, we get it, you love sea food and can't stop eating but are still so petite.

Also it feels like there is no real problem because if she is so strong, then what problem are we actually facing. It's a huge plot hole, how are you describing her as indestructible and the most powerful person, and still try to make it seem like she can't face the resistance. She just feels incredibly overpowered without it being in use.

I really like the concept and the guys in this book, but every book feels empty till the last few chapters. Also the world building feels non existent.

This series feels like an addiction because damn does it suck but i can't stop. 
Can't wait to read the next book I guess lol