It feels like it could be a good story tbh. 
But the writing is just not for me... The sentences are so short and it doesn't feel enjoyable to read. There's no flow in it for me. I think it has potential and really liked the description. But the book reads like my comment here tbh. Kinda chopped up. (English is not my first language) Dnf'ing is not something I usually do do maybe I'll come back to it later but right now it just feel right for me. 🥲