A review by mightyfrenchbookworm
The Inmate by Freida McFadden

  • Plot- or character-driven? Plot
  • Strong character development? No
  • Loveable characters? No
  • Diverse cast of characters? No

1.75

*"The Inmate" is disappointing on several levels. The writing style is overly simple, almost bland, making the reading experience monotonous and emotionally shallow. The main character, supposedly a nurse, lacks any real credibility in her role. Certain lines of dialogue, such as “*I thought you were unconscious or something,*” only reinforce this sense of inconsistency and amateurism.  

Furthermore, the interactions between the characters lack chemistry or any genuine connection, making it impossible to care about the protagonists or their relationships. McFadden’s typical narrative approach—presenting two hypotheses and bouncing the reader back and forth between them—ends up feeling more frustrating than engaging.  

The final twist, while surprising, falls flat because it’s introduced without any breadcrumbs or subtle hints. A good plot twist should leave you wanting to reread the book to spot the clues you missed, but here, there’s nothing of the sort. The revelation feels artificial, as if it was thrown in at the last minute to provoke a cheap shock rather than provide intellectual satisfaction.  

In summary, *The Inmate* suffers from poor writing, unconvincing characters, and an underwhelming plot. This novel, supposedly a psychological thriller, turns out to be a frustrating and forgettable read. It’s best avoided by fans of the genre who are looking for a more refined and immersive narrative.*

I probable should have dnf'ed it.