Would've been 4 stars but this book was far too short and lacked in actual storytelling or development. It was essentially a 60-page porno. Everything about the characters' lives i.e. Charley's internship, Kiki's job, Kenneth's obsessiveness wasn't explored to their fullest potential. This book is mainly about the sex and can be easily read in one-sitting. I'd give it 5 stars for the fan service alone but the critic in me wishes there was a better attempt at actually crafting a fully developed narrative.