My main complaint is there was far too much repetitive inner monologue. Anytime I opened up to the MMC's Chapters I knew to expect just straight-up horny. I get it man you are being highly effected, but can we come up with some new phrases? I enjoyed the FMC's dialogue a lot more. It was just giving. I came to expect a good time in her chapters with her unhinged thoughts.

Also how tf did girlie pop last as long as she did without her glasses????? I can barely see in the shower and she was out here being Indiana freaking Jones!