She is 25... so why does this read like a YA but with some spice? 

Why is there so much modern lingo in this? 

Everything is painfully predictable.  

The FMC is obviously seeing impaired, delusional or something because how you not put two and two together? 

The MMC could put her in a box and tell her it was a presidential suite and she would believe him. Without question

And she just does whatever no training nothing.  I was hoping the queen would come through with her plan end my suffering.