A review by endemictoearth
Maybe You by Briar Prescott

emotional funny hopeful reflective sad tense medium-paced
  • Plot- or character-driven? Character
  • Strong character development? Yes
  • Loveable characters? Yes
  • Diverse cast of characters? No
  • Flaws of characters a main focus? Yes

4.0

This was headed towards a five star, and is overall lovely. However, the chapter told in italics bc we didn't get dual POV was a weird choice to me. Contortions to get a glimpse into
Sutton's head
, but I'm not sure it was worth it. I think we either needed a more equitable split, or a better device to get
his backstory
.

I thought the parts dealing with Wren's
burn scars
were handled with sensitivity, and Wren is a great character. He has a wonderful disposition and outlook on life, considering what he's been through. 

I feel the
whitefanging
from Sutton went on a bit too long, but I can't be mad at the line
"Don't let me let you go."


(Also, I don't have a problem with epilogues, and this one was legit 15 years out (I think a proper epilogue should be at least a year in the future, minimum six months) but this one felt too rushed/packed with info bc we had so much ground to cover in a short space.)

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