the beginning is quite alright, it was a direct to the point approach to the story, so i thought it will come about well written. but when the story goes on, it becomes pointless, useless, and worthless. other reviewers were right, it doesn't have a plot. if it may have at some point, then the story failed to traverse a concrete and distinct path. events other than the sensual scenes come out just like a lousy impromptu, no twists and excitement, all cringe and cliche. the sexual scenes might have an aberrant approach, which made it a little interesting, but they're not even seem too amazing. the steamy seems are the only ones who gave life to this story but it consist more of the prompt rather than the sex itself, which is a bore. i swear this is the corniest novel i have ever read, which truly depicts the creation of a story born out of wattpad. if i had read it in there, then it might have my slightest appreciation being on the realms of teenage wildest imagination.