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A review by littleredmacks
Breathe and Count Back from Ten by Natalia Sylvester
emotional
reflective
medium-paced
- Plot- or character-driven? Character
- Strong character development? It's complicated
- Loveable characters? Yes
- Diverse cast of characters? Yes
4.0
One of the novel’s strongest aspects is its disability representation. Verónica’s disability is not framed as something to overcome or as a source of inspiration for others—it simply is. The book provides an intimate look into living with hip dysplasia, highlighting both the physical realities and the way others perceive visible disabilities. This nuanced portrayal makes Verónica’s journey feel all the more authentic and relatable.
Also, as a fan of The Little Mermaid, I loved the mermaid performance aspect of the story. However, the reality of working for a company that was unprepared to accommodate a disabled performer (given several actions on management's part) was frustrating but realistic.
While the main storyline was compelling, the romance subplot felt rushed and somewhat unnecessary. Verónica and Alex’s relationship didn’t feel fully developed, and I would have been just as satisfied (if not more so) if they had remained friends instead, or if the romance had only just started budding at the end of the story. There were times that he stepped up and was there for her (which made it feel rushed) and I would have loved to see her best friend and sister step into that role given how close they were.
The novel’s ending felt abrupt. Given how rigid Verónica’s parents were throughout the book, their sudden change of heart felt unearned and too convenient compared to the emotional struggles that led up to it (which were well thought out and realistic).
The novel’s ending felt abrupt. Given how rigid Verónica’s parents were throughout the book, their sudden change of heart felt unearned and too convenient compared to the emotional struggles that led up to it (which were well thought out and realistic).
Overall this book contains an honest portrayal of life with a disability that I would recommend.