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Single mother and business woman Kapri, is at a point in her life where she feels ,she maybe ready to open herself up to dating someone other than herself. She’s not sure because her twins and her laundry mat opening are all she is focused on . Little does she know someone sexy, rich, and determined has been eyeing her and he’s ready to make his move . What happens when two power houses in the business world, find they are extremely attracted to each other. It’s only a matter of time until they are both wrapped up into each other as they are their businesses.
Again Amberlei Jae has managed to write a story that I felt myself melt into. We briefly were introduced to Kendrix and Kapri in her previous book, and now we get to see what happens when Kendrix makes his move. Amberlei Jae has a way of making her stories feel like her characters are your friends, my friends. The way she writes the men in her books to not only be desirable, but to be men that treat their women beyond that of a queen . The way the men in her stories love their women as if there is no other woman on this planet to even look at . I’m telling you if you haven’t read one of her books you really should treat yourself . It’s always a great read that will warm your heart .
P.s. There is a playlist !!!! I love when she curates a playlist.
Again Amberlei Jae has managed to write a story that I felt myself melt into. We briefly were introduced to Kendrix and Kapri in her previous book, and now we get to see what happens when Kendrix makes his move. Amberlei Jae has a way of making her stories feel like her characters are your friends, my friends. The way she writes the men in her books to not only be desirable, but to be men that treat their women beyond that of a queen . The way the men in her stories love their women as if there is no other woman on this planet to even look at . I’m telling you if you haven’t read one of her books you really should treat yourself . It’s always a great read that will warm your heart .
P.s. There is a playlist !!!! I love when she curates a playlist.
I read this book as part of an ARC. When I give reviews for books I like to talk about the stories as if they were happening in reality lol. I give life to the characters. Typically when I’m reading I am immersed in that universe and simply enjoy the ride. I hate taking notes and marking things because I believe it takes away from the experience. With that being said, I want to talk 2 things in this book.
First since this has not officially released yet I’m truly hoping the author has time to fix this. There were so many grammatical errors that it distracted me from the story. These errors weren’t the type of errors that is necessary for the story such as characters using AAVE. These were errors where entire lines were duplicated back to back. Sentences running on, and words spelled incorrectly. It felt as though the author was trying to add as many words as possible so she was throwing things in there that didn’t make sense.
There were also issues with continuity. There were a couple of times when one thing would happen, and then a couple chapters later, it was as if that thing hadn’t happened. For example: The BFF of the MFC helped the MFC plan a funeral for a character. The character stated to another character that they saw how the BFF and them were getting close during the planning process… Then the next chapter the BFF runs into that character and says oh you must be such and such it’s nice to meet you… THEY HAD ALREADY MET…
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Now I want to talk about the story and I am going to try to keep the spoilers very very limited.
I couldn’t believe the MFC and MMC relationship. We didn’t get enough of it to believe a bond was formed. Everything was so surface level and not just with their relationship, with everything. We don’t get to truly know any of the characters.
The MMC irritated me at times because he would get aggressive with the MFC baby father. Most times I don’t feel like his response was reasonable at all and for me that would have been a red flag.
I do love a story, especially a black love story, where there isn’t a bunch of drama, the MMC and MFC are both established and emotionally aware. I love when a man knows what he wants and goes after what he wants (respectfully) and is not afraid to lay all his cards on the table. He did exactly that. He wanted her and he went after her. He didn’t care how it might look, he just knew he needed to come correct and he did.
I loved that the characters were committed to building up their community and providing luxury experiences to those that are less privileged.
I loved that the MMC, MFC, and the baby daddy could all come together to set boundaries and figure out how to move in this new dynamic. It was very mature and something I didn’t think would come.
All in all I see the vision here, I just wished there was more. I wish there wasn’t so many grammatical errors because that took a lot away for the experience for me, if grammatical errors don’t bother you then you will be fine. I wish we would have been able to see deeper into the characters and the relationships. I wish the world building would have been more detailed as well.
This is a quick read with drama free wholesome black love
First since this has not officially released yet I’m truly hoping the author has time to fix this. There were so many grammatical errors that it distracted me from the story. These errors weren’t the type of errors that is necessary for the story such as characters using AAVE. These were errors where entire lines were duplicated back to back. Sentences running on, and words spelled incorrectly. It felt as though the author was trying to add as many words as possible so she was throwing things in there that didn’t make sense.
There were also issues with continuity. There were a couple of times when one thing would happen, and then a couple chapters later, it was as if that thing hadn’t happened. For example: The BFF of the MFC helped the MFC plan a funeral for a character. The character stated to another character that they saw how the BFF and them were getting close during the planning process… Then the next chapter the BFF runs into that character and says oh you must be such and such it’s nice to meet you… THEY HAD ALREADY MET…
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Now I want to talk about the story and I am going to try to keep the spoilers very very limited.
I couldn’t believe the MFC and MMC relationship. We didn’t get enough of it to believe a bond was formed. Everything was so surface level and not just with their relationship, with everything. We don’t get to truly know any of the characters.
The MMC irritated me at times because he would get aggressive with the MFC baby father. Most times I don’t feel like his response was reasonable at all and for me that would have been a red flag.
I do love a story, especially a black love story, where there isn’t a bunch of drama, the MMC and MFC are both established and emotionally aware. I love when a man knows what he wants and goes after what he wants (respectfully) and is not afraid to lay all his cards on the table. He did exactly that. He wanted her and he went after her. He didn’t care how it might look, he just knew he needed to come correct and he did.
I loved that the characters were committed to building up their community and providing luxury experiences to those that are less privileged.
I loved that the MMC, MFC, and the baby daddy could all come together to set boundaries and figure out how to move in this new dynamic. It was very mature and something I didn’t think would come.
All in all I see the vision here, I just wished there was more. I wish there wasn’t so many grammatical errors because that took a lot away for the experience for me, if grammatical errors don’t bother you then you will be fine. I wish we would have been able to see deeper into the characters and the relationships. I wish the world building would have been more detailed as well.
This is a quick read with drama free wholesome black love