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The Dangerous Ones by Lauren Blackwood

3 reviews

adventurous challenging dark emotional funny sad fast-paced
Plot or Character Driven: A mix
Strong character development: Yes
Loveable characters: Yes
Diverse cast of characters: Yes
Flaws of characters a main focus: No

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adventurous dark tense slow-paced
Plot or Character Driven: A mix
Strong character development: No
Loveable characters: No
Diverse cast of characters: Yes
Flaws of characters a main focus: No

💬: N/A

📖Genres: historical fiction, vampires, romance, historical

📚Page Count: 368

🎧Audiobook Length: 11:06 

👩🏾‍🏫My Rating: ⭐️⭐️ - 2/5

The Dangerous Ones takes place during the civil war, where vampires are working with the confederates to continue enslaving Black folks. Jerusalem is a Saint and Satins have demi god strength and power and they use it to fight vampires. She is a former slave who fought against her slave master and killed him resulting in what she believes to be her whole family being slaughtered. Jerusalem gets word that her brother might be alive so now she's searching for the vampires from her past because they might have him. Alexi is a 300 year only vampire working with Jerusalem, a group of Saints, and the union to fight against the confederates. This definitely reminded me of Ring Shout but I don't think "The Dangerous Ones" reaches it's full potential. 

There were a few problems with this story; including confusing time jumps and flashbacks, to misplaced romantic banter, little to no world building and character development, and one dimensional characters. The time jumps were continuously confusing, I don't think they were very helpful in terms of story telling, they actually seemed to detract from the main story. I know that love is supposed to be part of the plot but it really felt like it didn't fit right in the story. It felt like I was reading two different stories, one where the main characters were in an enemy to lovers romance and one where there's action and the civil war with death and vampires. The two genres didn't really mesh well.

Overall, the audiobook narration was okay but, the pacing felt off, the flashbacks were more confusing than anything, the characters were one dimensional, there was little to no character building, the romance didn't really work in this story,  little to no world building, and the author used current and modern language instead of historical language from the times (seeing as this is a historical novel). I'm giving this 2 stars out of 5.
⭐️⭐️ - 2/5 Stars

Thank you [NetGalley.com], Lauren Blackwood (the author), and Macmillan Audio (the publisher) for the arc audiobook (advanced reader's copy.)

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adventurous challenging dark inspiring mysterious sad tense fast-paced
Plot or Character Driven: Plot
Strong character development: Complicated
Loveable characters: Yes
Diverse cast of characters: Yes
Flaws of characters a main focus: Complicated

Features:
  • Explores themes of race, slavery, war, and trauma
  • What if an escaped slave fighting in the American Civil War…but with vampires?
  • A blend of forbidden and enemies to lovers romance
  • Strong, black female main character as well as a diverse cast of other characters

Oh dear. This one is definitely a diamond in the rough. I have so many thoughts that it’s going to be hard to sum up, but here we go! Main characters Jerusalem and Alexei are well realized and have great chemistry on the page. I enjoyed their banter and the evolution of their relationship, but we don’t really get to see how they meet until much later in the book and not in a way that feels particularly meaningful. There are a lot of interesting ideas in the world building that I desperately want to see fully realized, but they were never woven together and developed in a way that felt truly cohesive. If you are into history like me, I am going to warn you away from this one right now. However, if you like stories that are action driven and/or vampire romances, I think this could be one you could enjoy. 

Pro: Character Chemistry

This book switches between two perspectives. The first is Jerusalem, an escaped slave with enhanced abilities. After running from her captors, Jerusalem joins a group of other people with enhanced abilities known as “Saints” and trains hard in order to exact her revenge. The other perspective is Alexei, an old world vampire of Eastern European descent with a complicated past of his own that he finds himself running both towards and away from in equal measure. Both of these characters are strong and independent, but Blackwood does a good job allowing space for vulnerability and errors that are clearly connected to their past experiences.

The first time we see Alexei and Jerusalem together, they are sibling-like in the way they antagonize each other while also quietly respecting and trusting one another. Unfortunately, we don’t get to live through the process of them meeting and getting to this point. However, they have great chemistry and it is easy to see how this friendship could bloom into something more. There are definitely some missed opportunities with both characters, but I found myself invested in them all the same. The other “Saints” each followed an archetype without much else to make them feel extremely unique and most characters beyond that were minimally characterized. However, I think the ‘blend’ of archetypes played well with the main characters and I wasn’t too upset by it. 

The Breakdown: What’s the Rush?

I’m just going to say it: structure is a real problem with this book. There is a version of this book that could be 5 stars and all it would really have to do is pump the brakes a little bit. We start with Jerusalem’s dramatic escape (which is very well done) and then in the very next chapter, we have jumped 2 years ahead and she is already well established in this group and close with Alexei. That in and of itself could probably be its own novel and the rest of this story would be better for it. Instead, the story tries to fill in the gaps with flashback chapters that find themselves competing with the present day action that unfolds at breakneck speed. As a result, the flashbacks themselves only cover the essentials and the memories shared don’t always have a strong correlation to what is happening in the present. I imagine at least some of this is intended to create curiosity in the reader to hook them in, but it falls short in execution and just feels a little thrown together.

Action is definitely prioritized in this book and there is nothing wrong with having a fast paced book. However, the themes this book tries to explore and the characters it uses to do so need to be given more time to develop in meaningful ways. Without giving any spoilers, I will say that there are some big reveals in the early parts of the story that could have been really amazing moments if more time was spent getting me invested in the characters and/or situation. As a result, I wasn’t really affected by some of the developments in the way I knew I should be. Additionally, you can tell that there is more to the world building and characters that we never really get to see or explore in the rush from one thing to the other. 

I am not a big believer that an alternate history needs to be as close to the real historical event/time period as possible. However, I think that it is important to have a clear vision of what this version of history looks like and that it remains cohesive and consistent. I understand and appreciate the story the author was trying to tell and there is enough here that I can even see how it could work in a wonderfully weird way. That’s why it pains me to say that this, my friends, is a glorious mess. I can’t even tell how much is intentional in order to ‘reach younger readers’ and how much is simply not spending enough time researching and editing. Unfortunately, this book is largely missing its sense of time and place and loses some of its power as a result. 


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