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merlionne's review against another edition
- Plot- or character-driven? Plot
- Strong character development? Yes
- Loveable characters? Yes
- Diverse cast of characters? Yes
- Flaws of characters a main focus? It's complicated
4.5
I loved the mythological aspects of the world, even though I don't know a lot about the actual people and their stories they're referencing. The only thing that bothered me a bit is that all the secrets that get unveiled are kind of ....eh? It's not a bad thing, maybe from a modern perspective they're a lot less shocking or it's a lot easier for me to expect something like that to be the case, but ultimately it works within the story and I'll read the next book because I want to see how Zetian blows up some more bastards.
Graphic: Alcoholism, Body horror, Death, Domestic abuse, Misogyny, Physical abuse, Sexism, Violence, Xenophobia, Blood, Death of parent, Murder, and War
Moderate: Body shaming, Bullying, Confinement, Death, Racism, Grief, Death of parent, Alcohol, Colonisation, and Classism
Minor: Animal death, Biphobia, Body shaming, Fatphobia, Homophobia, Infidelity, Physical abuse, Rape, Sexual assault, Sexual violence, Excrement, and Vomit
Even though it gets talked about etc, there are no detailed descriptions of sexual assault or other sexual violence. The book also includes a list of the biggest trigger warnings in the beginning, a lot of what I added here is in there somehow but for the most cases not overly detailed, extensive or dwelled upon.local_hat's review against another edition
- Plot- or character-driven? Character
3.75
Graphic: Alcoholism, Body horror, Child abuse, Death, Domestic abuse, Emotional abuse, Fatphobia, Gun violence, Misogyny, Physical abuse, Rape, Sexism, Torture, Violence, Xenophobia, Medical content, Gaslighting, War, and Injury/Injury detail
intothestarrysea's review against another edition
But man, the misogyny. And I don’t just mean the evil patriarchy in the book. I mean in the way her sister is fridged and then almost never brought up again, as if she didn’t exist except as plot motivation. I mean in the way the MC has 0 female friends and there is not a single female character she has a positive relationship with. I mean in the way the MC wants to end the killing of girls but is 100% okay with slaughtering boys. I mean in the way this book doesn’t pass the Bechdel test. I mean in the way
It was a good idea, and in many ways, it actually felt like the hunger games. It just didn’t hit the mark for me.
Graphic: Addiction, Alcoholism, Child abuse, Confinement, Cursing, Death, Domestic abuse, Emotional abuse, Fatphobia, Gore, Misogyny, Physical abuse, Sexual violence, Suicidal thoughts, Torture, Toxic relationship, Violence, Murder, and Alcohol
Foot bindingsquidface's review against another edition
- Plot- or character-driven? N/A
- Strong character development? It's complicated
- Loveable characters? It's complicated
- Diverse cast of characters? It's complicated
- Flaws of characters a main focus? No
2.0
So, I can't realistically say either way that the book was plot or character driven. It was probably a mix, but both were weak.
The character development was probably there for... I'd say at least one character, at a push two or three.
Personally I didn't mesh / particularly like or root for any of the characters (more below).
Diverse characters?
Character flaws? Oh boy, I can't. I can't even. What this author thinks are character flaws don't actually hinder the characters at all.
So, let's start with the positives. I was stoked to read a mecha book, being a huge mecha fan. I really liked that the book was influenced by Chinese culture, folklore, and history - honestly that aspect of the book earned it a full point from me. Using things like qi and meridians and animals that are sacred/part of Chinese legend, absolutely chef kiss from me on that. If this book goes any way towards getting people more engaged with and interested in Eastern cultures, that's a wonderful thing. I also liked the mech system in general, and the fact that the qi was basically a good way of explaining something of a "magic system" that was inherent to the plot, towards the end. I think perhaps it could have had a little more explanation, but only to round it off a bit. Other than that this was one of the stronger elements of the whole book and felt like the most polished aspect.
Other than that... let's focus on the other puzzle pieces we have here.
I felt the prose in general made this book stand out as a debut novel. I have no idea whether the author is a seasoned writer or not, but their prose is at times clunky and awkward. They're using verbs in a "quirky" way, not necessarily a "creative" way, but for some reason the editor and publishers haven't streamlined much of this at all. The descriptions aren't usually the ones I wanted - the book focuses a lot on battle scenes, I can think that there's at least 4-5 battle scenes during the book. Granted, the majority of the events take place on the front lines of a war, but it seemed to me as I got halfway through that the author used "the invasion alarms sounding" as a get-out clause to avoid many character development scenes or relationship building scenes. I also wasn't a fan of the endless adjectives, and also the tendency for the author to use 10 words where 2 would do, just to seemingly write around a cliche or a standard way of writing something. Didn't work for me.
The MC somehow knows what a "glitch" is (somewhere towards the end of the book she describes the landscape as looking all the same - as if they were running through a glitch). I have no idea how a peasant girl who doesn't have access to a tablet/technology for the first 19 years of her life understands what a glitch is or what one looks like. Unless it's one of those things just everyone kinda knows about - implied scifi knowledge? IDK, it stood out like a sore thumb to me. So while the MC did have a voice of her own, she was also pretty damn well lyrical with her explanations of things, in a way that sometimes took away from the rash and angry nature of the character.
The themes in the book were also clunky, awkward, and glaringly obvious. Nothing subtle here about the feminist overtones. In no way am I saying that inclusion of feminism is a bad thing - but the approach here was amateur and I'm not really sure what sort of feminism we had. The war-mongering, man-hating kind I guess. Our protagonist has absolutely no precedence for the types of feminist thought she has, other than "my mother and grandmother and sister and generations of women before me have had to endure this gruelling, toxic world where we are subservient to men". Ok, fine. It fits with the world and maybe it'll make more sense when the sequel comes out.
Slavery/subservience/breaking free of thy chains/deception/trusting/trauma/alcoholism/ and to a certain extent capitalism are all touched on, but to me they seemed more like the cherry on top of everything (or what people like to call an afterthought) than actual deep themes the author was keen to explore. Sure you can taste the cherry and enjoy it, but without it the dish is more or less the same, and it's added more for aesthetic and appeal than anything with more depth.
The pacing was.... something.
Look, I have no doubt that this book is popular, and certainly has some positives - I know everyone is excited that it has bi representation and also polyam representation. I do sort of wish we could have representation of polyam without the people within that relationship dynamic having to already be outcasts of the world/going against the grain.
I wonder how much this book honestly looks like it's original manuscript, and how much was stripped out, because by all accounts the author does say that they intended for there to be "more domestic scenes" which probably would have helped a lot towards character development. The only character who really shone at all for me was Shimin, because he's obviously a product of his trauma. But I felt the characters were messy and sometimes the justifications for what they were doing were so instantaneous or badly explained that I barely had time to register what was going on. The author didn't really let the protagonist feel much aside from constant anger or pain. Also, giving your protagonist a physical disability is not inherently a good character flaw. She can't walk, yet the solution to this is usually that she's scooped up and carried by a strong man. Zetian isn't that introspective to be honest, and she operates a bit like a one-woman army. Her motivations remain more or less strong and she does stick by her convictions, but by the time the polyam sparks start flying she's forgotten 50 pages ago that she's annoyed at herself for being so pretty and headstrong that all the men around her want her. She's described as being chunky twice, but it's sort of a throwaway comment both times (also how the eff would a peasant girl become softer-figured?) and struck me as the author just wanting to have an "unconventionally attractive" female protagonist, while still making her very beautiful.
MC is a mary sue, and the only other flaw I see in her is that she is willing to sacrifice to achieve her goals. I don't know where that is going to get her when she has nothing left to sacrifice.
But does all of this really matter, when it's blatant commercial fiction? Idk, I guess I just prefer my asian-influenced scifi robot mecha futuristic fiction to be a little more clever and well-written.
P.S. Not sure what initially labelled this as "too dark to be YA" in the eyes of the publishers, or what makes anyone think that it's similar to The Handmaid's Tale (other than women being a subservient class?). There is for sure some imagery later in the book that could be disturbing, but you have teens reading The Road; you tell me which one is more mentally disturbing?
Graphic: Alcoholism, Misogyny, and Slavery
Minor: Ableism, Addiction, Animal death, Biphobia, Body shaming, Confinement, Cursing, Emotional abuse, Fatphobia, Mental illness, Misogyny, Racism, Torture, Violence, Blood, Grief, Death of parent, Murder, Sexual harassment, War, and Classism
fuguefire's review against another edition
- Plot- or character-driven? Character
- Strong character development? It's complicated
- Loveable characters? It's complicated
- Diverse cast of characters? Yes
- Flaws of characters a main focus? Yes
4.75
As a poly person myself, I was over the moon to finally get a poly relationship in a fantasy novel! I will say, I wish there was a little bit better communication in the relationship, but I feel like this can be forgiven because this seems to be an action-first book, and the romance aspect is not even really second in line of importance here.
All-in-all, I am so excited to read the next book in the series. I will be recommending this book to my friends, and can't wait to hear what they think.
Graphic: Addiction, Alcoholism, Death, Emotional abuse, Misogyny, Sexism, Sexual assault, Death of parent, Gaslighting, Alcohol, Sexual harassment, War, and Injury/Injury detail
Moderate: Ableism, Fatphobia, Rape, Kidnapping, Abandonment, Colonisation, and Classism
Minor: Gore, Physical abuse, Racism, Rape, Slavery, Xenophobia, and Injury/Injury detail
alphabetmafiamember's review against another edition
- Plot- or character-driven? A mix
- Strong character development? It's complicated
- Loveable characters? Yes
- Diverse cast of characters? Yes
- Flaws of characters a main focus? No
4.75
Graphic: Alcoholism, Chronic illness, Confinement, Cursing, Death, Emotional abuse, Misogyny, Physical abuse, Sexism, Torture, Violence, Blood, Trafficking, Kidnapping, Murder, Alcohol, Sexual harassment, and War
Moderate: Addiction, Child abuse, Gore, Rape, Sexual assault, Sexual content, Sexual violence, Medical content, Gaslighting, Injury/Injury detail, and Classism
Minor: Body shaming, Fatphobia, Gun violence, Homophobia, Suicidal thoughts, Xenophobia, Colonisation, and Classism
therainbowshelf's review against another edition
- Plot- or character-driven? A mix
- Strong character development? Yes
- Loveable characters? Yes
- Diverse cast of characters? Yes
- Flaws of characters a main focus? Yes
5.0
Graphic: Alcoholism, Body shaming, Bullying, Child abuse, Confinement, Death, Domestic abuse, Emotional abuse, Fatphobia, Misogyny, Physical abuse, Racism, Rape, Sexism, Sexual assault, Slavery, Torture, Violence, Xenophobia, Blood, Medical content, Grief, Murder, Gaslighting, Abandonment, Alcohol, Colonisation, War, Injury/Injury detail, and Classism
jjjreads's review against another edition
- Plot- or character-driven? A mix
- Strong character development? Yes
- Loveable characters? Yes
- Diverse cast of characters? Yes
- Flaws of characters a main focus? Yes
5.0
Graphic: Ableism, Addiction, Alcoholism, Body horror, Body shaming, Child abuse, Child death, Chronic illness, Confinement, Death, Domestic abuse, Emotional abuse, Genocide, Gore, Mental illness, Misogyny, Physical abuse, Racism, Sexism, Slavery, Suicidal thoughts, Torture, Violence, Forced institutionalization, Xenophobia, Blood, Police brutality, Medical content, Trafficking, Kidnapping, Grief, Medical trauma, Suicide attempt, Murder, Fire/Fire injury, Gaslighting, Abandonment, Alcohol, Colonisation, Dysphoria, War, Injury/Injury detail, and Classism
Moderate: Biphobia, Bullying, Gun violence, Homophobia, Panic attacks/disorders, Vomit, Medical content, Death of parent, and Sexual harassment
Minor: Cursing, Fatphobia, Pedophilia, and Rape
rensreading's review against another edition
- Plot- or character-driven? A mix
- Strong character development? Yes
- Loveable characters? Yes
- Diverse cast of characters? Yes
- Flaws of characters a main focus? It's complicated
4.75
first of all, when people say this is feminist rage, they should also mention its not the modern-day feminism we’re used to and that the beginning is riddled with inner misogyny as well. it gets better and definitely resembles something more like modern-day feminism at the end but i still would have liked more elaborate reviews on that angle before reading.
wu zetian is bloodthirsty and i love it. she’s suicidal in the beginning, willing to risk everything to avenge her older sister and shed light on the unspoken horrors of the piloting system. i love that. what i didn’t really love was how much misogyny she had absorbed without even realizing it. she judged other women who were grasping at the only hope their society had shoved down their throats since birth and believed herself better because she rebelled against it all. “im not like other girls, i fight back” vibes. she ends up maturing and realizing women are not the ones solely to blame when it comes to their assimilation to the misogynistic society they’re forced to live in. yes their actions are their own, but zetian recognizes that the behavior and thought process are learned, just the same way she learned. the difference is she decided early on to fight back against it, no matter what it cost.
gao yizhi. oh, yizhi. the fifth child out of twenty-seven of one of the most powerful and disgusting men of chang’an. he definitely isn’t all sunshine and rainbows or the boy next door he projects himself to be. he’s bloodthirsty when needed, especially when it comes to his people. i think he’s the type who doesn’t like getting their hands dirty but absolutely will when push comes to shove. or when he’s lost one part of his soul and the other part is now being threatened by the man who (probably) forced himself on his mother then killed her later. i expected him to be the one to kill his father for sure. if it wasn’t zetian, it was going to be him. for a moment, i did think he would try and appease his father and leave zetian behind—they had just lost shimin after all—but yizhi surprised me. he surprised everyone. killed his father and forced everyone to recognize zetian as empress after they both lost a big part of their hearts. gods. he obviously has a mysterious past and definitely did questionable things for his dad, but im willing to wait and see about it. i doubt it would be enough to make me dislike him though. i think the only thing that caught me off-guard about yizhi was how kind he could be when his father was a piece of flaming shit.
last, but definitely not least, li shimin. the tortured, murderous man with an incredible amount of spiritual power. the man zetian is being forced to “marry” so to speak. a man addicted to alcohol who has lost a true match before and turned to the bottle to forget his grief for her and the other countless girls the army has forced him to kill. shimin, a young boy who used his strength and his body to pay for an expensive and prestigious school to further his education and ruined his eyesight in the process. a boy who studied under the dim lights of a fighting ring every night just so he wouldn’t fall academically behind. shimin, a man who killed rapists, his brothers, his father, and his family for the only person who ever bothered being kind to him. who let himself open his heart to a girl he was told was his match, not knowing those same people who put them together were dooming her. a man who was tortured into fighting again, forced to develop an addiction to alcohol and only fighting against it after meeting the one woman who could change everything. the one city boy who never found him lacking and fought him to get better. shimin who watched zetian and yizhi, knowing they loved each other and tried his best not to let it get to his head because the situation wasn’t any fault of theirs, nor his. the same shimin who laid himself on the wire so his loves could survive. i cried when he hit 0. i didnt want to believe it but i didn’t start hoping he was alive until that confirmation in the epilogue.
and gods, that epilogue. it makes so much sense that the hunduns were the indigenous people of the planet and not the humans. i had a feeling nothing was what it was cracked up to be and was proven right. the story was amazing either way though. plot twists were kind of obvious but i still liked watching them unfold. the cliffhanger though? that’s just a personal thing for me to be annoyed about it. realistically this is a 5 star rating but i have to bump it down to 4.75 for the cliffhanger alone.
Graphic: Addiction, Alcoholism, Body horror, Child abuse, Confinement, Cursing, Death, Domestic abuse, Gore, Misogyny, Sexism, Suicidal thoughts, Torture, Violence, Blood, Grief, Suicide attempt, Murder, Gaslighting, Alcohol, War, and Injury/Injury detail
Moderate: Body shaming, Fatphobia, and Sexual violence
Minor: Rape
content warnings for this book include: violence, suicide ideation, alcoholism, torture, referenced sexual assault, child abuse, bound feet, mutilation, body horror, murder, death, domestic violence, gaslighting, sexism, and misogynytinyjude's review against another edition
- Plot- or character-driven? Character
- Strong character development? Yes
- Loveable characters? Yes
- Diverse cast of characters? Yes
- Flaws of characters a main focus? It's complicated
4.5
She is definitely a character partly defined by her anger and defiance to the system. Patriarchy is lenthly tackled and criticized in this world. Even though she has her "I am not like the other girls" slightly annoying moments, she is an incredible character. I hope she is able to find and befriend many other women like her, which is what this book lacked (a lot, I dare say for a feminist book, but nothing that a sequel cannot fix). Kind of wishing she befriends now the other bitchy female pilote, I want some enemies to friends. I think they both could be fcking neat. Also, I think it would have also been good to add a few scenes with her sister in order to get a better idea of how she was, so that we care deeply about her.
I loved the worldbuilding but, most of all, A POLY RELATIONSHIP FULL OF CHAOTIC BISEXUAL PEOPLE. LETS GOOOOOO. Yizhi being the lawfully good boyfriend who makes a snack for his murderous girlfriend and boyfriend... oh, I love them. I hope we get a lot more cute and domestic scenes between them and, ehem, Zetian said she can also be attracted to women so... GIVE HER A GIRLFRIEND IN THE NEXT BOOK I BEG
Anyway, morally grey characters, a lot of murder and torture, chinese history mixed with modern technology, criticism about patriarchy and a poly relationship, very good food :)
Graphic: Alcoholism, Misogyny, Sexism, Torture, Trafficking, and War
Moderate: Addiction, Body shaming, Fatphobia, Suicidal thoughts, Violence, and Suicide attempt
Minor: Physical abuse, Rape, Sexual assault, and Sexual harassment